And You Don’t Remember Me Poem by David Harris

And You Don’t Remember Me

Rating: 5.0


I sat on the park bench
pen and notebook in hand.
I watched all the people
as they passed on by.
I wondered how in life
each one of them had fared
with their happiness
and their sorrows.
I looked for inspiration
for something to write.

She looked at me and smiled,
I smiled back
thinking that was that.
“You don’t remember me? ”
She said and sat down.
I looked at her again
as memories swirled
around in my mind.
She was right
I didn’t remember her

Her hair was mousey colour
with flecks of grey
starting to appear here and there.
There were thick lines
across her forehead,
crow feet lines
near the corners of her eyes.
The corners of her mouth
drooped just slightly.

Her blues eyes were striking
and I knew I had seen them before,
but they were with a younger face
a long time ago.
A face that lit up
whenever she spoke.
“You still don’t remember me? ”
She asked once again.

I shook my head,
but unfortunately, I did.
I could remember
all the beauty
she had had in her youth,
before time had ravaged her
and taken away her beauty
and her youth.
She looked so sad.

I wanted to reach out
like I always wanted to,
but something deep inside,
a little voice you could call it,
kept telling me no.
My urge to hold her
was trying to win out,
but I couldn’t do it.
She was no longer
a part of my life.

All she was now
was a memory I clung to,
a memory of my youth
so long, long ago.
With notebook and pen,
I smiled and bit her farewell.
I whispered her name
as I said a last goodbye.
I didn’t look back
or I would have looked back with regret.
She was a past,
something none of us can ever relive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 29 December 2007

It would seem that my comment on your poem about your first love could even more poignantly apply to this one. Oh the ravages of time! love, Allie xxxx

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Aine Ní Leidhin 27 December 2007

David - I've removed my previous comments on this poem because you kindly reminded me it's fictional. Based on that knowledge I think that you've managed to 'paint' a very colourful picture indeed. Intriguing thanks. Kind regards Aine

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Shannon Wright 26 December 2007

I give this a ten, thanks for sharing. -Shannon

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