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Another Day Without You

Another day with you on my mind
Another day without you in my life
How could I let you slip on by
Without you I can barely breathe
Without you in my life I'm just ordinary
And with you in my life we're extraordinary
I'm gonna find you
Gonna get to you
I've gotta be with you
Cause you're the only one that makes me feel this way

The only one who puts a smile on my face
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Young Poet 06 July 2009

i like to write about missing someone, too...and i can verily relate with the emotion in the poem. truly, sometimes, i feel that what i have been doing with my life-like working like a dog and trying to focus on something i am passionate about, like hip hop dancing and writing poetry-they all kina sorta like fade ebcause she isn't there to share those things with me. aaaaargh! you just made my heart bleed. lol!

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 January 2009

good poem of the first day of the year, , , , , , , , , , , , , good writing

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Scott Austin 01 January 2009

Your feelings are expressed very well in this write, wonderfully done.. Scott

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