Another Love Poem Poem by Fallen Angel

Another Love Poem

Rating: 5.0


Love is like a bird-
you catch it only to watch it fly away
you stand and remember without a word

we all wait for the day
when we are complete
when that will be one cannot say

all i can do is wait
until i can wait no more
that's when he'll come-not a moment late

he will wrap his arms around me
and stay with me forever
his love-an unending sea

but until then, all i can do is prepare my eager heart
and hope that i'll be ready when he comes
to promise forever to have and to hold till death do us part

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeremiah Jan Agustin 08 February 2010

love is like a bird. i admire your poem....all of man's deep love.

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Shane Clawson 02 November 2007

Love has a lot of meanings but you set the record straight with your thoughful mind and skills as a poet. A poem I must keep. Thanx for sharing!

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Lisa Matthews 11 October 2007

Don't doubt your ability as a writer. You're an amazing writer. I've been writing since I was a kid. It doesn't matter what age you are. It's what you write. I like this poem.

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Coreena Dejesus 16 July 2007

that was sweet i remember those days... good job: -)

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nice poem...i liked it alot...reminds me of when i was searching for someone to love me...check out mine sometime... until then 3moStar

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