Abandoned by all those she knew,
As though they couldnt see through,
Her painted on guise,
they just sat there and aqiesced her lies,
Sitting there in her tacit pain,
she wanted to forget that painful name.
Hopeing no one will see the signs,
All those tiny red lines,
Wishing they would go away,
Healing themselves during the day,
Refreashing themselves in the cover of night,
When she is alone and to tired to fight,
The only one she cared for was no where near,
So she slipped into the common fear,
She knew not to go to deep,
For if she did they all would weep.
this is one of the best poems i have EVER read! ! ! ur an amazing writer and u should keep at it.... i kno a 14 year olds opinion means very little in this world but this piece got to me
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
THIS ONE IS DEFINITELY MY FAVORITE! ! ! ! It is AWESOME! ! ! ! ....Just like me! ! ! NINJAS! ! ! ! <33Payyton