Leaving Poem by Kat Edwards

Leaving

Rating: 5.0


You are so far away,
I wont live to see day,
Dont have a reason to live anymore,
after you left me and closed the door.

You live you breath,
And after you leave,
I loose my head,
Cant get out ot bed.

I want to end this now,
Grab the gun next to my bed,
Point it to my head,
Life ends NOW!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Kat have you been holding out on me? ? ? ? ? ? ? Girl this is AWSOME! ! ! ! <333Payyton! !

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Tom Balch 27 July 2008

Dont use the gun, keep using your pen, great poem 10/10

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Daniel Allen 27 July 2008

This worries me. This poem is great, but they are right stick with the pen. Guns solve no problems. I lost 2 friends yesterday and i havnt slept. Trust me think of your family and friends and the pain they would go through. And if you do how many poems will be for you.

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Frank Cannon 28 July 2008

I will if you will... keep going that is! ! Great write Kat.

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Garfield Grimmett 28 January 2009

good poem...interesting: D...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2008

In short said a lot......fine.......10

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I'm with Jon. continue doing what you do lady

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Mark Jos'e 01 August 2008

sometimes we all have to live, i like it is real

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~ Jon London ~ 30 July 2008

Hi Kat, Anyone who can write words in such an outstanding way as this, needs no gun to fire.........these emotional lines speak volumes.....keep them coming Stay strong Kat warmest regards Jon.

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