Another Voice Poem by Kevin Fisher

Another Voice

Rating: 4.0


Shut up, shut up all you tell is lies
Loser, your weak I can tell that your afraid
I'm not, I'm strong, leave me the f**k alone
Are you crying
Your soon to be dieing
Enough, get out, go back where you belong
Get out you say, I can't, I wont
Why you don't belong
Oh my friend your oh so wrong
Explan yourself demon
Well I am you and you are me
No, no, theres noway this can be
Its true, you fool, you created me
Lier, lier, I couldn't have created thee
Pathetic, you weakling, You'll die with me in mind
How, how can I break this horrible bind
A knife, your knife, dig me out your head
Your right, a poke, its all that I will need
Your right, fight me, I love to watch you bleed
Aww your dead
Dead by another voice in your head.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kristina B; Williams 28 June 2009

well deserved 10, my friend

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Yelena M. 31 March 2009

Agree very creative and maybe a bit too gloomy but you have your own style, and you are very good at expressing subconscious ways. Best wishes. A.

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 25 February 2009

Creative az ever and worded pretty good. Not bad, not bad.

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