Apologies My Community Poem by Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

Apologies My Community

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Be hold, my son

Thou status does not grant
Noble community membership.
I know what a society demands,

High paying jobs,
Expensive cars,
Speedy lifestyles,
Educated people,
Luxurious homes

Look at me. I'm locked.
Yet, I had had it all.
I quenched the best of thirsty of fame.
Now, I'm disgraced for I killed a man
When I drove while I was drunken

Surf Oscar Pistorious,
The world will tell you.
Or ask Jube Jube,
The South Africans will tell you

Tuesday, May 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,lessons of life,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2018

'What society demands' is well inscribed in this poem. More over you have inscribed...... Look at me. I'm locked. Yet, I had had it all. I quenched the best of thirsty of fame. Now, I'm disgraced for I killed a man When I drove while I was drunken A beautiful poem having touching expression with a lesson of life has been shared startlingly.10

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Thanks again for sharing your thoughts about this poem...be blessed

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