Apologies My Community Poem by Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

Apologies My Community

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Be hold, my son

Thou status does not grant
Noble community membership.
I know what a society demands,

High paying jobs,
Expensive cars,
Speedy lifestyles,
Educated people,
Luxurious homes

Look at me. I'm locked.
Yet, I had had it all.
I quenched the best of thirsty of fame.
Now, I'm disgraced for I killed a man
When I drove while I was drunken

Surf Oscar Pistorious,
The world will tell you.
Or ask Jube Jube,
The South Africans will tell you

Tuesday, May 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: educated,jobs,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2018

'What society demands' is well inscribed in this poem. More over you have inscribed...... Look at me. I'm locked. Yet, I had had it all. I quenched the best of thirsty of fame. Now, I'm disgraced for I killed a man When I drove while I was drunken A beautiful poem having touching expression with a lesson of life has been shared startlingly.10

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Thanks again for sharing your thoughts about this poem...be blessed

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