Vibrant Love Poem by Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

Vibrant Love

Rating: 4.8


I'm afraid but
I cannot take in
Your landslide defeat
Every second of my life
Since I confessed
My love to you
I'm consumed with disbelief
Why am I so deprived?

You vigorously outstriped
My heart depth with your,
Paradise piece of love,
With your continental smile

You summoned deep feelings
Of caring & responsibilities
That causes the walls
Of class divisions
And race segregations
To tremble & tumble
To dust

Yawning stereotypes,
Religious divisions
And socio-economic
Trends to melt in
The warmth of love

Vibrant domestic
Feuds & vendetta
To fade in waves
Of reconciliation
As yesterday's clouds
Vanish leaving
The blue skies of love

Fuelled by the
Foundation of love
Resting on the rock of
Ages that cleft for the love

Tuesday, November 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,freedom of speech,love,love and life,poetic expression,race,social injustice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chazz 23 November 2017

This is beautifully constructed, yet so mind blowing... master piece right there??

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Sam 28 April 2021

I like the way you play with words in here

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2018

You vigorously outstriped My heart depth with your, Paradise piece of love, With your continental smile....great poetic expression my friend! My pleasure revising this fabulous piece of poetry!

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 August 2018

Many thanks Dr Dillip for your wonderful thoughts on this write...much appreciated

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Chandan Dey 04 July 2018

Dear poet Lungelo, it's an extraordinary way of making protest against social injustice, where another end is deeply rooted with heavenly Love. The poem is a wonderful poetic expression of Protesting Love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us....10 Chandan

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 05 July 2018

Thanks Chandan for your insightful analysis of this poem... I really appreciate all your positive feedback.

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Hazel Durham 03 July 2018

The power of love is so beautifully written with prejudices a distant memory as love is master of equality, fairness and loyalty that has no boundaries! I love this brilliant write and it will go on my favourite list of poems! If you have time could you please read my poem 'Reckless Words'

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 04 July 2018

How I much I appreciate your kind feedback on this poem! Sure I will do that...Thanks once again.

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Lincoln 27 June 2018

Best of your best poem....nice to read, with deep emotions..

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 27 June 2018

Thanks Lincoln for such kind comments

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