Apparition Poem by Alon Calinao Dy

Apparition

Rating: 4.9


Last night I had a dream.
In my dream,
I saw a beautiful lady
Who everyone wish to love.
Suddenly,
She appeared to me
This ''White Lady''
Who was very pretty.
I was around the corner
In my kitchen for dinner
When I saw her stunning beauty,
As if inviting me to go with her.
With a little doubt,
I followed her.
As I walked through the stairs,
I could see happy people
Welcoming me with their smiles.
I saw the whole place,
As it was a land of ghosts
And images of people long gone.
I got scared.
I started to ask her,
About things have changed.
She never said a word,
And disappeared.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was my dream last night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 06 November 2012

How very interesting. It t'was of a pretty silence.

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Louis Cecile 01 October 2012

I like the way this poem is structured and the sense that something is going to happen at the end. The sudden ending works well. Very well done

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 October 2012

Apparatuses having the muse of their own sounds and poetic phenomena...very deep and allusive write and top marks hereby

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Alon Calinao Dy

Alon Calinao Dy

Samar, Philippines
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