Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Arpan Comments

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Korilam arpon ja kichhu chhilo
amar jivoner majhe
tariy tomar akhil bhubone
bhense jaye chokher majhe
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ramesh rai
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 December 2014

Beautiful dedication. Tera tujh ko arpan Kya laage mera... Thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 December 2014

Very nice poem Internal and external music can be heard-Korilam arpon ja kichhu chhilo amar jivoner majhe(I surrendered what ever I had in my life) very deep thank you sir Accept my salute being a shoulder

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 03 December 2014

Vansi kothay amaadir man mohechhe tar sure.....kothay gelo surey alo aaso ammadir maner palo....The tuning of flute makes it wonderful and attracts creature by his divine grace. Beautifully crafted poem.

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