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Artemis And I - Poem by naida supnet

She is my favorite, goddess so great
She and I are friends, in my mind I create
I will be her companion in her hunting spree
We will chase in the wilds, the woods maybe

We will bathe in a pool, a pool very clear
Where no mortal could see us, no mortal near
But yes if theres one, then let him vanish
For no one is worth to see the beautiful miss

I will help her protect the children, the women
I will help her call out to bring the soothing rain
We will roam in the woods never stop hunting
And together we'll play running, laughing, shouting

I will be by her side when she shines for the earth
We will watch each mother deliver a new birth
If she smiles when the world pays tribute for her name
I will be much happier witnessing her fame

She is Diana the goddess I love
Tough yet gentle, gentle like a dove
She graces the sky with her ladies in waiting
And charms every man who won't stop admiring

Beautiful goddess who appears in the sky
Never fails to inspire every girl who is shy
A lady so charming, charming far or near
Forever I will love her do you hear do you hear.

Comments about Artemis And I by naida supnet

  • (2/25/2015 5:08:00 PM)

    Was good in the beginning, but at the end failed to actually rhyme, and some rhymes did not add up, I suggest re-looking at line couplets 7-8,9-10,11-12,19-20. these are not real rhymes despite that they may either sound similar or have similar endings. my suggestion, unless this is on purpose is to have a rhyming dictionary like RhymeZone with you while you are creating your poetry, also it is good to have a thesaurus in case there is a word that does not rhyme well you might be able to have a similar word that works better. All just suggestions. (Report) Reply

    Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/5/2015 5:43:00 AM)

    thank you Kenzie for the helpful suggestion
    sometimes one can't see a flaw, and it is good to know there are those who could help.

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  • (7/27/2013 7:24:00 AM)

    good imagery make good poem
    great works
    thanks for sharing
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/8/2012 12:09:00 PM)

    A tribute heart-felt can never be ever better than this one yours...Good application (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (8/1/2012 5:11:00 PM)

    great vivid write....almost from the perspective of eye in the sky...
    I love Homeric themes and this is done with wit and care....

    beautifully written....a lovely ode
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  • Anhelica Velasquez (3/23/2012 6:36:00 PM)

    verry nice i admire the work put into this poem. shes a great goddess. amazing and the greek ones have ussually been my favorite also (Report) Reply

  • (10/26/2011 12:17:00 PM)

    A proactive statement for feminine virtues in one of the greatest female goddesses of grecco-roman pantheon. Though personally I like Athena slightly more, your dedication to this goddes is touching, and the sentiment is even more true. (Report) Reply

  • Kaila George (10/18/2011 6:46:00 PM)

    Wow thats so write as if you know them so well...hmmm need to work on that myself...smiles...bravo (Report) Reply

  • (10/14/2011 2:55:00 AM)

    U got grt pieces of art, simple bt on! (Report) Reply

  • (9/13/2011 9:30:00 PM)

    The words created an amazing harmony... I just love how you express the reality of how the goddess inspire women on the last part of this incredible craft, from fantasy to actuality...: D nice work! (Report) Reply

  • Edwina Truelove (9/12/2011 12:30:00 PM)

    A very nice devotional poem, I'm sure Artemis would approve. (Report) Reply

  • Michael Oliver (9/7/2011 4:14:00 PM)

    There is a music in this poem.It has something of the Brahms Musensohn forgive me it is a long time since I saw this writtten out.You have captured the fresh air of the hunt running through the hair. This is an accomplished piece of verse and writing. (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (8/22/2011 12:19:00 AM)

    She is Diana the goddess I love
    Tough yet gentle, gentle like a dove

    Very subtle though philosophical and religious signifance are observed here.Well done.Nice conception.
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  • (8/11/2011 10:45:00 PM)

    I felt like I was traveling the journey with you and enjoying it all... the woods
    the clear pool... but I didn't peak.... and the admiration and protective aura
    and all the wonders you painted for us........ Thank you for the ride.....

    Jim Troy
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  • (7/12/2011 6:18:00 AM)

    Wonderful one Naida! ! ! Ur love for greek Gods n Godesses show in ur poems :)

    U r a lover of powerful, strong women as well as who have the very feminine factor within them.... lovely imagination tht was... Wish u vl get fame very soon :)
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  • (3/7/2011 2:45:00 PM)

    the meter is perfect for the scenes that you set.
    I felt as though i was in that forest hiding waiting for a glimpse.
    beautiful imagery and depth of expression. well done.
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  • Louis Cecile (3/7/2011 2:25:00 AM)

    Good choice of theme for a dedication. Interesting use of language and the poem helps to create a scene if you are familiar with mythology. Excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Abhay Vignesh L (3/6/2011 10:22:00 AM)

    Wonderful imagination.Refreshing theme.Definitely an enjoyable read.Glimpses of great standard.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (3/4/2011 9:03:00 AM)

    i love how u pay your respect to Artemis. i too love remembering the greek gods and goddesses, and although Artemis is the best of the best, i appreciate Hestatia Goddess of the Hearth, u know, what she symbolizes and stuff like that. +10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/27/2011 4:18:00 AM)

    So beautifully u have maintained the suspense about your idol Diana, untill in the stanza just before the last u disclose her identity. This aspect of ur poem makes its more interesting. You are a touch different poet from what I have seen out here. Well done Nadia. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 24, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 13, 2011

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