naida supnet

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Every Poet's Vision - Poem by naida supnet

Alone under a tree, a vision comes to me
People will look at me, with satisfaction I can see
I will smile back at them, whoever they may be
Until we smile all along, smiling happily

I walk towards home with a pen in my hand
Scribbled all the thoughts that come to my mind
Till the stars in the sky, appear, then out of sight
Tomorrow and onwards continue I will write

That was many years ago, cause now I am old
My works are accepted, that is I was told
As I sit in my chair, with my hair growing white
People look at me with a smile in their hearts

Though now I am about to bid farewell to the world
I have no regrets, It's my time to be called
I will leave feeling glad with a smile on my lips
Thankful for the happines, I was able to give.

Comments about Every Poet's Vision by naida supnet

  • Life Is My Poem....~ (3/16/2012 9:44:00 AM)

    Beautifully written..
    this poem expresses every poets vision...!
    .as its is said poets has dual life after in the heavens and the other in the works left behind....
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  • (2/7/2012 2:34:00 PM)

    A very enjoyable poem and it sums up how all us poets would like to be remembered.
    Well done!
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  • Chidori Storm (12/21/2011 9:10:00 PM)

    That is every poet's dream and vision. This is a very good poem. I like it. It flows almost like a song. (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (10/12/2011 9:38:00 AM)

    Very nice..a very dignified vision
    a vision of a true poet..a poet with a big heart..
    really nice....
    really inspiring...pls do read my ' A Poet's Aim, A Poet's Dream'
    You're like a silent river Naid....
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  • (4/12/2011 5:05:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem. There is no need for improvements apart from that you continue to write. Each poet's style is unique and they way theywrite is how they define themselves.
    -Continue spreading your words of truth around the world =D
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  • Phillip Joshua Jimenez (4/12/2011 9:18:00 AM)

    You see you can't just leave the Planet Earth until you've invested much in your talent. By all means, you should invest whatever God has given you for His glory because when the time comes when you will be standing before His White Throne, you will give an account about that in front of Him....
    Nice poem, sis!
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  • (3/26/2011 2:11:00 AM)

    very well done! ! ! this what you really want as i remember.... (Report) Reply

  • (3/25/2011 9:20:00 PM)

    Wow, Naida, this is really some excellent writing. (Report) Reply

  • (3/4/2011 9:13:00 AM)

    this IS every poets vision. to leave a peice of themselves for the benefit of someone else, to invoke thoughts, feelings, actions. great job and +10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/24/2011 3:09:00 PM)

    your character shows in the poem. you character is a happy person that always thinks possitive and never seems to compain about anything. I believe that you love your life (Report) Reply

  • (2/17/2011 10:52:00 PM)

    Beautifully written, nice flow of words and thought. Every poets dream you express. It's such a beautiful write.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (2/8/2011 1:39:00 AM)

    How beautiful is it when too strangers share warmth with a smile? so beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2011 8:49:00 AM)

    How amazing that we can learn so much from others. I can feel the pulse of giving and sharing pounding through your poem This is what sets a poet and a master apart. I applaude you. Well done Naida (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2011 8:49:00 AM)

    How amazing that we can learn so much from others. I can feel the pulse of giving and sharing pounding through your poem This is what sets a poet and a master apart. I applaude you. Well done Naida (Report) Reply

  • Dennis Go (11/26/2010 11:00:00 AM)

    beautiful thoughts on writing, growing old and the sentiments one leaves behind.

    nice to see a kababayan here on poemhunter :)
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  • Dennis Go (11/26/2010 10:20:00 AM)

    beautful outlook on writing and growing old!

    Nice to see a kababayan here on poemhunter :)
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  • Wandering Scarlet (11/26/2010 1:00:00 AM)

    how delightful (Report) Reply

  • Deep Dark Soul [poet] (11/23/2010 5:58:00 AM)

    Ang isang tunay na makata, nakalulugod iba muna
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  • (11/21/2010 3:53:00 AM)

    The place to be to write 'Alone under a tree' and your happy not only for yourself it shines out of the poem a vision indeed...regards (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2010 8:34:00 PM)

    Very nice. You have written it very well.
    You excellently painted a picture of what a good poet might desire....funny, you captured the personal glory as well as the pleasure of pleasing others.
    And it is so well drawn by beginning under a tree...that was excellent symbolism.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 13, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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