Artistic Aspirations Poem by Edith Oram

Artistic Aspirations

Rating: 5.0


I'd like to paint please show me how,
The pull is strong within me now,
Create in colours, let them flow,
Express emotions, let them go.

Watercolour is my first choice.
Lilting landscape lures me, voice
Pleading, to paint, to capture
Scenery to enrapture.

Swift sketch on paper so pristine;
Variable wash to set the scene.
Dab in clouds. Now, where's the light?
Take care to keep those parts bright.

Mixing and merging tonals grow,
Form valleys, hills and forest floor.
Brush in branches, spatter on leaves;
Dry wash on water if you please.

Stand back, view the emerging scene.
Water reflection's like a dream.
Stroke here, touch there signature neat,
Passion spent, masterpiece complete.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 11 August 2008

The last stanza has a beauty of its own...well...Edith, this one is a master frame...the line, 'Now, where's the light? . commands the entire poem to march towards bright colours...poem ten grade

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 August 2008

Yes! Masterpiece complete! A masterpiece of words and expressions. kudos sathya narayana

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R H 03 May 2008

An expressive wordpainting Edith - emotions coloured and visuals eloquently expressed. Lovely.. j x

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Anita Atina 03 May 2008

What a lovely painting Edith!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 May 2008

Vivid imagery sathya narayana

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