As a painting....
He takes a precisioned brush
And paints vibrant hues into my world
As a beautiful sonnet...
His gold tipped pen
Suffuses the paper with eloquent words
As a perfect summer day...
He fills my skies with radiant blue
And escorts light into my life
As a lovely melody...
His voice brings pleasure to my auditory senses
Quelling and soothing in tone
As a friend....
Being there always to listen and understand
To offer a hug or hold my hand
As a lover...
Knowing just how to touch, to tender such love
To speak without a word
As the sea/ I feel to receive my sweetheart, / let her float upon me, / sail towards our island.
This is absolutely stunning work, Miss Lily....Amoure de la tres grande, juenne femme! ~ FjR ~ ..2006..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The analogies drawn are stunning, each parallel carries an interesting thought, quite sensuous, loved this classic style….