As A Man Should Be Poem by Lillian Jamison

As A Man Should Be



As a painting....

He takes a precisioned brush
And paints vibrant hues into my world

As a beautiful sonnet...

His gold tipped pen
Suffuses the paper with eloquent words

As a perfect summer day...

He fills my skies with radiant blue
And escorts light into my life

As a lovely melody...

His voice brings pleasure to my auditory senses
Quelling and soothing in tone

As a friend....

Being there always to listen and understand
To offer a hug or hold my hand

As a lover...

Knowing just how to touch, to tender such love
To speak without a word

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 23 April 2008

The analogies drawn are stunning, each parallel carries an interesting thought, quite sensuous, loved this classic style….

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As the sea/ I feel to receive my sweetheart, / let her float upon me, / sail towards our island.

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This is absolutely stunning work, Miss Lily....Amoure de la tres grande, juenne femme! ~ FjR ~ ..2006..

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