' ' ' ' As Above So Below(For Lyn) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' As Above So Below(For Lyn)

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I show her
the stars.

'Are they ours? '
she whispers.

'Only if we name them! '
I answer

as the Universe
undresses itself
before us.

I name the stars
for her

making up names
for the stars I don't know

...the names of.

'This one is yours...it's a Tilly star! '

I show her how
to hold it

betweeen forefinger
& thumb

gently
gently

I tell her what
constellations are.

Next night
the moon finds her

arranging her collections
of pebbles shells & stones

(taken from the mouth of rivers
taken from the sides of seas 0

adopting
a star's position

mimicking each
constellation.

'I want to be able
to see them
even when
I can't see them! '

All that sunny Sunday
her constellation of shell & stone

shone brightly
in the noon day sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 09 May 2009

The world, the mind, the very heart of Miss Tilly is conquered once again, and beautifully! ! Love IT, and HER!

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Sonya Florentino 05 May 2009

this is so beautiful... i think it's about a little girl, right? or it could have been about a woman, it doesn't really make a difference....

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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