As I Ramble True Comments

Great written poem sir....well structured and rhymed...............

The rambling is definitely subconscious, and it is always true, leaving the night and darkness yet apart…. A beautiful line ………………………….. There is hope, optimism, picturesque imagery all together….

yet all seeming chilled even the blue yet I see the dawn in dream coming true with warmth of the day when I ramble true looking to the sun crooning to the east. So much feeling put into this Dr Subhendu Thankyou for sharing it Love duncan X

When one individual gifted with words and tries to put it in pen, it is one like you that will open the horizon of others to unravel the mystery of poetry. Very well then. Thanks for sharing! ! !

what can i say more than, well penned.

Life has riches to offer Some will fade with the years And all the remains Are just traces of tears. Hold onto your Truth The Realities that you know Sleep and let your mind be free Imagination goes wild and untamed This is where the Truths and Where the Realities begin Hold tight dear one and Dream...