As I Trail Behind The Shadow Comments

very good poem but the last word may be reconsidered for a better in place.nice reading

Yes.. there are many opportune moments that 'happen to happen' and your 'grain of rain' has got be be my favourite 'poetical sprinkle for the day'...xx

we 're the shadows of life!

This truly is a Beautiful piece...an inspiring one that makes a reader want to read more! You are so Good at writing with amazing imagery! 10/10 As Always I anticipate reading more of your work very soon. Take care of U my friend.... Shelley

A poignant description of a fleeting moment of bitter-sweet intensity that lingers in the mind of the reader. Love your title - a fitting metaphor for unrequited love. A soft poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Dr. another beautiful sad and sorrow behind....I felt every words the hurt in your heart.

Delightful! I love the last stanza, a fine ending to a poem that has universal appeal.

'Yet with baited breath by the beauty I went into the dream peeling all my sorrows For a moment when intense...' The finest display beauty of soul... Thank you Kar... 10+......... Tsira

I just loved how its flowing very beautiful write...

A dreamy write of love, a mellow and capturing poem! Thank for sharing! ! Best Regards Friend Thad *10*! !