As Lotus Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
As Lotus
If we believe in God
There will be no worry or load
Since we have become materialistic
We often approach Him for unrealistic demand
There is always selfish desire
We never go with peaceful offer
We ask for more and more
Always seek his guidance to add more
It is human tendency
Ask for reprieve and mercy
God is great and he will always grant
Whether you want or not
How come one religion takes you to heaven?
When you have no sympathy for neighborhood even
On the name of religion you cause bloodshed
Be on wrong side and try others to mislead
If you think and believe in his existence
Seek good faith and love’s essence
He is listening to each request
Try to live as human being and serve the best
We are here not to score
But live happily and adore
He is merciful and generous
Let us remain in mud but come out as lotus
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 3 hrs · Unlike · 1
Gotta think on this one. Natalie King13 minutes ago Great poem. God does have a lot if requests. How is it that we all want him to do for us when so many don't do anything for him? Comment +1 Irene Meader13 minutes ago Okay I don't usually review or comment on peoples works, because I don't think they should be judged whether they are good or bad but since I have to on here then I will try my best. I am not a religious person so it kind of stinks that I got your poem to review but like I said I will do my best. I think the poem had good flow and the wording is good. Everything that was said seems to fit together and it an easy read. So keep up the good work! : D
Good Job. Irene Meader13 minutes ago Okay I don't usually review or comment on peoples works, because I don't think they should be judged whether they are good or bad but since I have to on here then I will try my best. I am not a religious person so it kind of stinks that I got your poem to review but like I said I will do my best. I think the poem had good flow and the wording is good. Everything that was said seems to fit together and it an easy read. So keep up the good work! : D
decent. Adara Anderson16 minutes ago It would be great if you carefully review and do a spell check. Not for misspelled words just for words missing mostly..
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If we believe in God There will be no worry or load