As The Pendulum Swung Poem by Kevin Fisher

As The Pendulum Swung

Rating: 5.0


As the pendulum swings and it gets so low
It penetrates the skin and the pain grows
I get a tear in my eye but not from the pain
I know now that I'll never hear your voice again
The pendulum gets lower and my intestines fling
All that's in my mind is the last time we were speaking
You can't save me from these chains or this dangling steel
Yet you did help me
Your words did heal
You cured my broken heart so you were all I could think about
As the pendulum swung.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

wo0o0o0ow i really felt ur pain! ! great poem i loved it 10 +++

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Adeline Foster 11 June 2009

Almost a Poe theme, would you say? I do so appreciate a poem with attention to spelling. Adeline

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*I'm not broken. * 16 June 2009

This is an amazing poem, probably the best you have ever written. The emotions sweeping through me as I read it were so deep and it's like I could feel your depression myself. Amazing, kevin. Keep writing. kayla

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Ashley Wilson 13 June 2009

dude that is very very very deep

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a well and heartfelt poem Kevin....

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Lassy Lay 11 June 2009

i really like it its writen well..you can kind of picture it its really good could you read some of mine and tell me what you think

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Kristina B; Williams 11 June 2009

i really love a poem that you can relate to, and while reading it, you feel yourself there, whether it be from now or some distant memory.gave you a 10. now fairs only fair, will you do me the honors of reading my newest edition..dont ask me.. but tell me what you really think.please rate it for what its worth.its not as serious as yours is.i played around with this one.just was tired of writing, my realities

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