As The Whispers When Red Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As The Whispers When Red

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words when whisper
the heart echoes in red
blood when red flints to flow
by the red vain as the fire obstinate

still it glows in red when obsessive
as the rose razzles red in its room
breath eternal when resourced red
the mystic red when whirls in the red wine

passion intense when swaying intoned
evening glows when inkling fell red
lest be tweaking the lips over the red
by the window of glistening red eyes
yet the anger spews its reeks by the red
as geometry of the dew rills betiding red

mist red as happens to happen by the leaf tips
as when twitched by the senses as the stepping red
sun when setting lays its curtain red over the green
as love mystic seems to descend red enshrined

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 09 March 2008

'sun when setting lays its curtain red over the green as love mystic seems to descend red enshrined ' - Same there is an Unusual mysticism... I have read It as a mystery Beauty fine.... Tsira

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 04 March 2008

Amazing imagery Subhendu! Truly I am Always amazed at your unique style of writing down your thoughts! Your poetry paints pictures to your readers that maybe we would never see...I Like that! ((smile)) Keep up the really excellent work my friend...... Shelley

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Thad Wilk 03 March 2008

Stunningly expressive a great read Dr.Kar! Thank U for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Broken Peaces 03 March 2008

Your words have a mystical aura as if plucked from a far higher plain, it is a most enchanting style you have Dr. thankyou for this gift Chris 10

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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