As Time Goes On Poem by Deci Hernandez

As Time Goes On

Rating: 4.5


The indian mounds,
So long ago,
You can see from the sky,
But from the sky, you could not see.

The St. Louis Arch,
So recently,
Standing so high,
Now we can see.

Look below,
Oh
No,
What a travesty.

Men have built mounds.
Men have built sky scrapers.
Men have not built
To behave themselves.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Calico Jack 23 April 2012

I like poems that say something, and say it well. This fulfilled both criteria in an eloquent fashion.

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Deci Hernandez

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Camp Verde Arizona
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