Monday, June 5, 2017

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The Poet dilettante, pretty words,
—not much else

Your world falls apart, head buried,
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Pamela Sinicrope 05 June 2017

So your poem centers around this quote: Freedom is won by blood when all cowardice spurned So who are the characters in your poem. To whom is the speaker accusing of being a clueless poet with all pretty words and no action- ashes in mud? Must we fight fire with fire every time? Provocative writing.

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