Ashes To Ashes Poem by Leslie Ching

Ashes To Ashes

Rating: 4.9


Will you remember me
After I’m gone?

[[ a s h e s to a s h e s,
d u s t to d u s t ]]

When eternal slumber takes me
Under the earth so cold; no,
I will dissipate into history
Like a hundred other souls
In this graveyard,
This graveyard of forgotten dreams.
Life makes one powerful, yet;
Why is it so delicate?

[[ a s h e s to a s h e s,
d u s t to d u s t ]]

As soft and fragile
As a young tree’s leaves
Easily carried off
On the slightest misgiving breeze.
When life has left them,
Will you remember
Your dear departed ones?

[[ a s h e s to a s h e s,
d u s t to d u s t ]]

Oh, the memory may remain
But how long will it last?
Only as long as reminders stay.
Shapeless, immaterial,
Precious memories -
Sweet as
A dropp of honey
Bitter as
The bite of cold
As fleeting as
Sparkling dew in the morning sun.
So when I rest in peace
Under the earth so cold
Will you remember me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
isatou Juwara 01 September 2012

ashes to ashes...dust to dust...yes, you will be remembered by your poems....keep it up...

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Fubara Benstowe 11 July 2010

This is very interesting, i like the lines, creativity and messages. Keep it up, you are very good.

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Craig Mize 15 June 2010

What a great poem and what a great poetess you are. I have to be like everyone else this poem is a prefect 10 poem.

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So when I rest in peace Under the earth so cold Will you remember me? u r perfectly grown as poetess.. no doubt abt it....10 read mine rest is piece

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Surelychoo Certain 13 June 2010

Awww of course I'll remember you! :) I love your descriptive language and use of lining. And the thingamahjiggy in the chorus or refrain or whatever. You know, the [[a s h e s to a s h e s, d u s t to d u s t ]] thing. Nice job! 10+++++++++++++

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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