Ask Yourself Poem by Doris Cornago

Ask Yourself



Some people cannot be made to bother
Find out what should differ in others
As long as their happiness lies on
Things that matter to them, how
To dress, what looks improper
The young can dress as
They want, the olds
Can and should
Creative minds
Are not boxed
Unsquare
Make
Your mark
Do not leave
Footprints in the
Dark, step where you
Want, dance to your hearts
Delight, with or without music
Or just be there relishing the rain
Despite the pain, unclutter your brain
Hearts beating, too much force in your
Movement, am I getting anywhere with this
Ask yourself, does it make you escape obstacles

Ask Yourself
Thursday, July 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: harmony,unique
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We all started out as squares, fitting ourselves to a society which minimizes discords. In time, as we seek out our sphere, we learn that out there is another world where we can be free, be heard, and be discovered as we are. Sadly, the discovery comes too late and we find ourselves warped out of shape by mislabeling by our peers. Do you truly care?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2017

Some people cannot be made to bother Find out what should differ in others.. beautiful beginning with lovely theme. As a whole it is a beautiful poem. Enjoyed with beautiful photo provided. Thanks for sharing.

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Doris Cornago 28 July 2017

Hi Kumarmani. I like gifts for the pleasure of opening them, as much as writing poems for the pleasure of what it opens in another poet's mind. I'm glad for your appreciation with keen eyes. It's truly a privilege to write poems and a greater privilege to be read by poets.

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