At Home, While Out There Poem by Rob Knetsch

At Home, While Out There

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at home
home, this private place
yes here, there may be
many things, items owned
all the stuff bought, given
animals for company, pets
or for food, meat, a meal
a lover, a darling, a sweetheart
a husband or wife, a spouse

while out there
there is something else
something that is not here
no not here, not at home
it is something that is missing
something that is captured
in a word that can replace all
those many other words, yes
a word that is written as friend

"at home, while out there" © 2014 Rob Knetsch

Monday, July 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: friend,friendship,home
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 17 July 2018

Lovely poem, though complete, but still missing a friend, BUT I thought that the wife or the husband IS the best friend after all the miniscule quarrels. I can say this because of own experience of course, but if yours is different and you created this lovely poem, then your married life is not as you expected to be. IF so, the friend in your concluding line, IS that someone you still need. Thank you for sharing, Rob!

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2018

it is something that is missing something that is captured in a word that can replace all those many other words, yes a word that is written as friend.....valuable friendship...... no man is an island here on earth......... thank u for picturing the necessity of friendship and how serene friendship is. tony

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