At Its Discretion Poem by Luo Zhihai

At Its Discretion

任憑

日暮深山花覆路
風涼僻巷笛牽愁
筆通心境常悲喜
身若浮萍任去留


At Its Discretion

At dusk in the deep mountain
flowers cover on the road
The wind cools in the side-lane
the flute leads the sorrow

The pen opens up the mood
is always sad and happy
The body like duckweed
at its discretion to stay or leave

4/7/2020格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9853首對聯體詩
The 9,853th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft) . The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.

Tuesday, April 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,sun,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2020

A dusk well perceived at the top of the mountain. This poem is very interestingly penned. A nice imagery is drawn.

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Luo Zhihai

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Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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