Sunday, September 10, 2006

At One's Wits' End Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the wind chill,
A broken-wing lavish bird
Crash-land to my wistful world
and begged for a shelter.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Duncan Wyllie 23 September 2006

I hope that you have the abillity to take flight...in words and in person Love duncan

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Sandra Fowler 10 September 2006

Flying is what birds were born to do. It is an instinct with them they have no choice, but I am sure the little bird will remember the orchard keeper's kindness and choose to come back for a visit now and then. Lovely poem, Nimal. Lots of charm displayed here. Warm regards, Sandra

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Amanda Lukas 10 September 2006

Now THIS si what I'm talking about. I am absolutely in love with this one.

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Goldy Locks 10 September 2006

betchya she takes off soaring! i'm just running out & glad i caught this one, Nim. good read.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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