At The Confluence... Poem by Fasika Ayalew

At The Confluence...

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At the confluence
Our souls converged
Like the Blue Nile and the White
Tears flowed as one
At the confluence of our soul
Stamped on our smile
Our hearts danced as one
Crossing the desert
Passing through the forest
Over the mountain,
And through the valley…

Pumped by the force of emotions
Squeezed through our eyes
Our tears flowed as one
At the confluence
As our soul entwine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 05 December 2008

love is confluence of two souls- nice imagery. tears of joy and ecstasy- emotional write. good work Fasika Mamta

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 December 2008

Beautiful poem Fasika. Your imagery, as always, is very close to nature which is good for poetry. Please keep on writing. Love is confluence of two souls.

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