Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Avalanches Of Solitude

Rating: 4.5
Marching down high altitude
Engulfed by white solitude
Avalanches of snow pile upon
The aching part of the lonely soul
With bullets of ice wounded inside
Frozen is the heart by the blizzards
The soul and heart together huddle
Rub in silence hope to kindle
Chilly, frosty with pensive mood
Cold are the days of solitude
Till the snowy storms finally abate
Put me in your cave to hibernate
Fasika Ayalew
Jazib Kamalvi 16 November 2017
A refined poetic imagination, Fasika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
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Anil Kumar Panda 01 March 2016
Clever use of metaphors to express your loneliness. Very nice.
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Fabrizio Frosini 02 February 2016
sent an email Cheers
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Alem Hailu G/kristos 30 November 2015
A picturesque poem.You have well penned down the feeling of loneliness.A good work.Keep it up.
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