At times I wish, I could just run and never come back. At times I think I wish I could be invisible or be in disguise.
No matter what happens. I still have these feelings inside me and it is killing me softly.
All I want to do is close my eyes and pass peacefully.
I see the pain I cause you, with every tear I shed.
I beg you please let me go now! I ‘m tried of living this life.
I’m tried of hurting myself and pretending that every thing is ok.
When it‘s not. I’m tried of waking up everyday thinking what I’m I doing here?
I’m tried of seeing you get hurt by my actions.,
but before I go, Can I ask for your forgiveness?
For you to set me free, and so I can pass in peace.
It may seem ungrateful, but this life's not meant for me.
Thank you for all your love, for all the time we shared,
It means the world to me, to know that someone cared.
And was there for me.
Good bye! We shall meet again some day!
By Lucia Domingos Fula
extrodinary poem. it describes emotions really well, i just hope you don't truely feel like this poems tone sounds because you write so wonderfully
WOW you have what it takes it really moved me! ♥ it is so sorrry i am speechless now: O You're amazing, perfect, great, poet♥ ♥
I enjoyed this one it really speaks to me ive been in a similar predicament more metaphorical than actual but i really do like it
This poem captures the angst perfectly and form-wise it is also excellent. Maybe more images and metaphors etc could be used in another piece to capture your feelings.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are apoet of high emotion. Very constructive in creative field. But you should pick up the objects scattered in the universe of different colous, shapes, tastes. Good Bye i.s. God be with you. You will cross a long field of life with proud and honour So write the poetry of life to struggle and to enjoy with different dimensions. Thank you...write more.....live long........ Apoet