Look at me,
Tell me what you see
I have 2 identities.
Which is hard to see.To my friends and family, I’m a different me.I have a secret identity,
Which may not describe me.
The secret identity that I have is deep inside my soul which is hard to find. I’m still searching hoping that I will find the complete me.myslef and I.
Hi Luzia This is also a nice poem - the last line should be revised to spell myself correctly. The message is that you're searching for yourself, but that will change with time, and the gathering of knowledge. Life is a journey and some of my thoughts are contained in my poem The Journey. I hope your journey is a pleasant one, although the harder times tend to deveolp character in us. Be good to yourself and treat yourself kindly. Make good choices in life and take responsibility for your actions. I wish you luck on your journey through life!
A lot of people are with you, who are looking for their identity and even when it is found they are confused about it. Your thought process is productive, this way is a nice medium. God bless.
This is irony of human nature, at times one can not say what one's want where he or she wishes to go. Wonderful reveleation of human complex nature.
Revelation about yourself with complexity of hidden character. Well written and sincerity was display in each lines. Keep it up... and hope to read more from you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yeah. You spoke truth that it is a complex quest to indentify oneself. But i'm sure you are a good poetess whose poems are nice like her.