When Things Go Wrong Poem by Lucia Domingos Fula

When Things Go Wrong

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When things go wrong
and you think your beaten, you are.
If you like to win but think you can't,
It's almost a cinch you won't.
But if you change the way you think
and try to do what you always aimed for, you can.
For it is there inside you
All of the potential you need
To be whatever you want to be;
and all of the energy
To do whatever you want to do.Even though at times it may seem too
difficult to continue, but still hold on to your dream.
Just take life one step at a time
and continue working towards your dreams and within a blink of an eye, you will wake up one day to find
That you are the person you've always dreamed of,
Doing what you wanted to do,
Simply because you had the courage
To believe in your potential
And to hold on to your dream.
But remember that it all depends on you,
so work to make your dreams come true.

Peace and Love,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carole Harwood 24 February 2012

A very inspirational poem by a young poet. Great insight...very good for self esteem building especially for younger people facing hard times.

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Lucia Domingos Fula 24 February 2012

Thank you, everyone! #One love God bless y'all and thank you for your support.

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Yoan Konkobo 24 February 2012

This is pretty good.

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Olivia Thimes 24 February 2012

That was amazing.True talent

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Ace Of Black Hearts 24 February 2012

This is something I put up somewhere as a motto. For I feel and believe everything you said true. It has the wisdom of confidence. Cheers good poem.

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DOM DE DEUS JUNIOR AKA TIMON 15 February 2019

I READ THIS AND I LIKE IT, YOU ARE A GREAT ADVISER DEAR, KEEP IN THAT WAY, I COULD LIKE TO WRITE MORE BUT MY INGLISH IS SO BAD LOL

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David Wood 22 May 2013

A nice poem full of expression. I invite you to read some of mine & comment.

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Prasetya Utama 26 June 2012

Bagus, kejadian sehari-hari yang disusun menjadi puisi. lanjutkan!

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Prasetya Utama 20 March 2012

Really, very expressive

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Natasha Smith 25 February 2012

That was a good poem so keep it up thats how we should feel

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Lucia Domingos Fula

Lucia Domingos Fula

London Middlesex hospital
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