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Aulde Schole

Return to the old school
those spacy rooms
bourgeois furniture
plants sundry
crust habits
installation institutions

structures heavy
sag me to my
sore profounds- but

shine a floodlight i
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Andrew Fincham 16 February 2005

This works for me. Looks like you fixed the typo - but there is a messy freedom here that makes spelling a bit irrelevant (have I spelt that right?) . Like your use of 'plumb' as a colour in the Auschwitz verse - let it go where it will, and you get more.

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Poetry Hound 03 January 2005

Not completely coherent to me, but I like the flow and original imagery. Suggest checking for typos (e.g., unlved) before posting.

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