Kwai Chee Low

Silver Star - 4,454 Points (24 Oct 1948 / Kuala Lumpur)

Autumn - Poem by Kwai Chee Low

Autumn breeze soft and cool,
descending from the mountains,
whistling through trees and dales.
Leaves of red and gold,
shiver and fall.

Autumn flows in the lakes,
and wavelets ripple the surface,
in tune with the autumn wind.
White swans dance in pairs,
without a care.

Lazily I soaked in autumn's coming,
and the wetness of the misty rain.
The earth soft under my feet,
a lingering warmth since dawn,
of a summer now gone.

Topic(s) of this poem: autumn


Comments about Autumn by Kwai Chee Low

  • Cigeng Zhang (1/22/2016 6:26:00 AM)


    Autumn is a poetic season. I liked your theme, beautiful. (Report) Reply

    Kwai Chee Low (1/22/2016 7:21:00 AM)

    Thank you, Cigeng. I love those autumn days that I spent holidaying in Melbourne several years ago. The aair was bracing and cool with beautiful mornings at 3 degrees.

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  • David Wood (9/11/2015 3:28:00 PM)


    A delightful autumnal poem with good imagery. Good ink. (Report) Reply

    Kwai Chee Low (9/11/2015 7:45:00 PM)

    Thank you, David. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 11, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, April 4, 2016


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