Autumn's War.....A Sonnet Poem by elysabeth faslund

Autumn's War.....A Sonnet

Rating: 5.0


Speak you the days of Sun's warmth quietly.
Reverently. This church will open doors
Too soon, (much too soon) to galing Autumn's
Outrage of being summoned into fire.

Fall does not greet us gladly...welcoming.
Damping down Summer's heat is a challenge
Disquieting. The War, even now, has
Begun. Longer shadows announce the first

Skirmish. Degree by degree will fall like
Icing rain...sleucing into overcoats.
Temperatures dropping like fireplace logs
Into the hearth of hearts. Heat we wanted

Only months before. Now, changing our minds,
Wish coolness...never knowing Autumn's War.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 21 July 2008

Powerful imagery. This poem, like so many of your recent ones, is a feast for the senses.

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Duncan Wyllie 16 July 2008

I cannot write like this, for if I did my face would light up like the sun This is pure brilliance * Love duncan X

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Michael Pruchnicki 16 July 2008

I love you, girl, but autumn takes its toll as does summer with its oppressive heat and the constant fire of heaven's artillery, and we still survive through the Russian winters with the waves of ice and snow assaulting us on all sides. That is the man's fate! (Yeah, and woman's, too!) Consider the alternative, my dear! Good stuff, elysabeth!

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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