Awaiting Dream Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Awaiting Dream

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From windows of my eyes half alive,
And wet with memories grey but good,
Mangled now and tinged with solitude,
I waited for my dreams to arrive.
Somewhat shy and no less meek of will,
I've put a paradise with the feel
Of my heart, wherein I've now planted
Fresh, sweet-smelling, soothing memories,
And await now a new fragrant breeze
To waft in life uninterrupted;
And in hope await that dream of dream
Along with early dawn to arise
Well before the sun wakes up my eyes—
And I hope my dream be no more grim.
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In anapaest meter
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Musings | 14.02.2017 |

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dreaming of dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 30 January 2019

A beautifully poetic expression on dreams. I like your poem. It's soothing and it has a beautiful flow.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 January 2019

Thank you Aqua Flower and welcome to my poems.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 January 2019

I've put a paradise with the feel Of my heart, wherein I've now planted Fresh, sweet-smelling, soothing memories....I admire the sheer beauty of expression! A lovely poem...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 January 2019

And this are not just poetic lines. Experts on dream believe, you can if you want invite your dream. They are the products of our subconscious mind, but they also come on a purpose, as a reminder, giving you a message, and as a result of your long-drawn thinking. Thank you Dr Swain.

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