Awaiting Succor Poem by Doris Cornago

Awaiting Succor

Rating: 5.0


Hours
Spent with
You are gold
My world shifts
Like sand on sea
Travelling fearless
Eyes on your image
Shimmering distant
Strength recovered
Strap recompensed
Touched with fever
Shiver like Bieber
Without control
White pigeons
Are legions
Awaiting
Succor

Awaiting Succor
Tuesday, June 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,me against myself,pigeons,salvation,strength
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a woman's matchless strength when in love. In her mind, she can do anything to protect her loved one/ones. Even if her body is weakened, she pushes on with the single vision of establishing contact - some form of communication which goes beyond the physical. She is meek but she can summon legions during times of adversity to save whoever needs her.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 19 June 2018

Love gives strength and sends away even the slightest trace of fear.Marvelous poem!

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Doris Cornago 19 June 2018

Love is marvelous, Kostas, as you are, because of your greater love for all. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 June 2018

Such a great free verse, Doris....10++++

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Doris Cornago 19 June 2018

Yes, Bro Bernard. It's a great feeling to be loved. :)

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