Awakening Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Awakening

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What awakes, when I pass that lane...
a memory so dear so familiar.
The warmth of that hand,
two bodies lying in the sand,
Love in the eye
which always made me shy!

What awakes, when I pass that tree...
which helped me from secrets free.
words that meant 'They understand'-
who have seen me cry in pain.
The fragrance of those blooms
took away all my gloom! !

What awakes when I revisits my heart
happy and sad memories tear me apart
Ghosts of the past
are all gone at last
now the world is better
&, thats all that matters! ! !

Jan,08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 21 May 2009

Memories will always linger on us ma'm...how ever much we try to forget we will always live on those precious memories, but if you can forget those haunting bitter memories, yur life will be soo beautiful indeed....10++

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C. P. Sharma 28 April 2009

Now the world is better, Now it will never shatter.

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Indira Renganathan 10 April 2009

Awakening memories to matter a change..well said Deepti...and thanks for your comment

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Chitra - 19 September 2008

thoughtful! and inspirational.

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Vidi Writes 06 May 2008

Let this feeling of awakening, Happen with you and all of us everyday We will never grow old. We will just keep growing. Thank you for making me young. Nice one

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Prashant Shaurya 17 December 2009

beautiful poem madam.. its true memories make us write something beautiful like this whenever we are in a reminiscent mood.. what awakes, when i pass... lovely use of refrain.. and it meant so much.. the rhythm was beautiful and the rhymes too.. regards prashant

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 September 2009

Very thoughtful write. Inspirational too. Nice poem Enjoyed reading it

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Ted M 18 August 2009

The beautiful moments, the innocent mischief, the raw creativity in whatever we used to do in the past are stored safely in that Safe of ours, only accessible to us whenever we need to take a peek down memory lane and relive the moment. At times you wonder; was I really like this? So smart! So good!

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Arth Desai 28 July 2009

The walk down memory lane just makes us realise some things Just Happen! Nicely written.

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Siddharth Singh 23 July 2009

nicely penned nostalgia.

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