Babe Poem by Tom Allport

Babe

Rating: 4.4


Babe hold my hand
And understand
How close can we be
Before we see
The strand- which
Pulls and parts
Our hearts
The line so fine
Yours and mine
Loves divine
Through infinite time
Everlasting never parting
Always reaching- reaching
Babe hold my hand
Forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 06 April 2017

Most of the pop songs I listen to refer to a man's girlfriend as 'babe', so you have got the 'in' word. A touching love poem.

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Garry Rowlands 04 April 2017

Lovely structure.. Flows beautifully. I ennoyed it.

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Julie Smith 29 March 2017

I love this poem, so emotional and lovely [3 Thank you for commenting on mine :)

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Michael Walker 16 March 2017

'Babe hold my hand' sets the love theme to a concise love poem. Very fine writing.

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Leslie Philibert 06 June 2014

Good job, a clear voice

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 September 2024

Still TOP Marks 5 Stars 10 points! Worded in full excellence.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 September 2024

I cite you: Everlasting never parting, true love never dies, the bond of love is unbreakable. Immortal poem, dear Tom

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

To My Favourites! Thank you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

Excellent poem so touching my heart, I so admired this beautiful poem 5 Stars full

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 September 2020

Touching poem and very sad but well captured. Thank you for sharing, Tom!

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