Tuesday, July 11, 2006

Back Home To My Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw the stars weep
in the desert tonight
and I heard the whipoorwill call
all alone in the world
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Charles M Moore
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Esther Leclerc 13 July 2006

Ah, wistful yearning in such capable and poetic hands, this is absolutely beautiful. A keeper. Thank you, Charlie.

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Will Barber 12 July 2006

I enjoyed this so much. It's a gorgeous write. Echoes my youth, and my love of certain music that I heard in my youth. I'm grateful to have read it.

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Linda Ori 12 July 2006

Charlie - If I didn't know better, I'd think you were out here in the Utah desert country! Sounds like a cowboy's lament. Nice change of pace, and a bit sad. Linda

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Patricia Gale 11 July 2006

I saw the stars weep in the desert tonight and I heard the whipoorwill call Tis splendid lines to catch the reader, lovely write, hurry home!

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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