Thursday, January 14, 2016

Backbiting Comments

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I felt like itching on the back
Tried but unable to reach the spot
I showed it to doctor, no skin rash, no redness
Nothing he said, then what is happening and why?
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 12 July 2016

Humorous poem...........wonderful.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 January 2016

Hahaha. This one has brought a smile to my face. I love the humor in this poem. It's good that instead of chastising and deploring the habit of backbiting, you have conveyed your message in a light-hearted manner. And mostly a subtle message drives home. Well penned friend.

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Valsa George 17 January 2016

There are quite a lot of such beliefs. Some say they sneeze, when others talk about them! Some say that when their palms itch, they are going to get money! Though no logic is there behind, such beliefs are common with everyone! Interesting write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2016

Gossip is a Bad habit. Nice work.

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Rajnish Manga 15 January 2016

Amazing imagery. Looks like somebody was practicing sorcery in your back. Humorously interesting. Thanks for sharing, Md. Asim ji.

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M. Asim Nehal

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