Backwashes In Time - Version # 5 Poem by Michael Hopkins

Backwashes In Time - Version # 5



Backwashes in time

Reservoirs of our old pain

Will you drain the pain?

©2019M.N. Hopkins

Backwashes In Time - Version # 5
Tuesday, August 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: healing,pain,release,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note:In this poem the first line of it just popped into my head yesterday evening and the second line I constructed to fit the first.The third line can to me over two days in five different versions.I usually pick one version and discard the rest.This time I decided to publish five different haiku poems with the same theme just slightly different wording.I will ask you to pick the poem you think is best.You can tell me which one in the comment section with a number,1 to 5 if you would be so kind and are willing to do so.I published all five poems on my blog today for the first time on the 6th of August,2019.
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