Backwashes In Time -Version # 3 Poem by Michael Hopkins

Backwashes In Time -Version # 3



Backwashes in time

Reservoirs of our old pain

Fear not and let go

Backwashes In Time -Version # 3
Tuesday, August 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,healing,letting go,pain,release,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note:In this poem the first line of it just popped into my head yesterday evening and the second line I constructed to fit the first.The third line can to me over two days in five different versions.I usually pick one version and discard the rest.This time I decided to publish five different haiku poems with the same theme just slightly different wording.I will ask you to pick the poem you think is best.You can tell me which one in the comment section with a number,1 to 5 if you would be so kind and are willing to do so.I published all five poems on my blog today for the first time on the 6th of August,2019.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 01 September 2019

Memories! ! Pains of the past! ! ! However we can't change the past. Forward ever! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Michael Hopkins 02 September 2019

Yes, forward ever. The future awaits Edward.

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A B Faniki 06 August 2019

Deep Thanks for sharing

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Michael Hopkins 02 September 2019

A deep welcome to you AB

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