Balance......Imbalance! Poem by kafil uddin raihan.
Balance......Imbalance!
Every sphere of our life,
We try to keep balance,
When there is an imbalance,
There is a disaster,
Economics, politics, sports,
Culture, society, family,
Every where the balance theory.
But this balance...imbalance theory,
Driving us to our extinct,
We never feel, never understand,
But we are changing daily,
Turning into monster from man,
Becoming unknown to ourselves.
Yap, When we balance,
Our morality with reality,
Then we loose our individuality,
Then we walk ahead to the dark,
We forget our own,
And become a new man,
greedy, lusty, nasty man.
Please don't balance it,
Leave this imbalance,
And be a real man of honor....
very nice and philosopkical.... its a libra thing...horoscopes say so but well written and deals with an inportant subject...maybe i lll come back for4 a comment later cheers
Well written. Send me the link once you have written another.
It is a poem on a serious theme and it is thought provoking - the predicament of modern man. I enjoyed it greatly.
If it wouldn't be for imbalance, you would never know the importance of balance. Nicely written.
this is life, , , it's between balance and imbalance well penned thanks for sharing 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:55:53 PM # 1.0.0
Ahhhhh. Equilibrium and how there is none in modern society. I did not look at things that way. Message is really something I did not expect. If I might, though, you can choose to word it more delicately. A bit more figures of speech. Some flurry/fluff. But bravo, you have shown me some new paradigm that I will surely think about for days.