Banet's Serene Eyes Poem by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

Banet's Serene Eyes

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BANET'S SERENE EYES
Melvin Banggollay


When you came with thy sweet serene eyes
Smiling with fragrance that truly hipnotize
I can't look at you directly through your eyes
For I felt my heart's breath is wildly magnetize.

Your young and sweet with beauty full of charm
That can really turn the eyes of every gentleman
And your voice so tender, lovely and truly warm
trigerred my heart to beat fast and fly like batman.

The melody of your loveliness have captured me
and I can't help but to dream you in my fantasy
For only through this medium, I can freely display
This burning love I felt the first time I saw thee.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Stirk 24 April 2009

A great poem and nice enjoyable read. The balance and rhyme and meter are all there. Best Steve

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Sandra Martyres 24 April 2009

Beautiful poem on love at first sight

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MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

Natonin, Mountain Province, Philippines
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