A Breath Without A Life Poem by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

A Breath Without A Life

Rating: 5.0

We need to breath to live
to see the the birds to fly
To feel the wind to leave
To let our dreams go by
but when we love no more
and heart's closed its door,
We breath without a life
No joy to heal life's strife.

We need to love and care
And show the joy of life
to those who need a cheer
To those who lived in strife
To those who need a care
and thirst a love so bless
that we can share our best
and meaning of life's quest.

Monday, October 13, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: life
Ency Bearis 13 October 2008

truth of write to dare...thanks for sharing... Ency Bearis

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Chitra - 15 October 2008

true lines springing forth from the inner mines

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Kesav Easwaran 26 October 2008

sharing love is sharing life and sharing life is breathing life...well said, Melvin...thanks for 'sharing'...10

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 October 2008

And if only we could convince even 1/3 of mortal earth, to exercise this as their life's mantra....what a far more peaceful world....we would pass to our children! Very fine work..ROCK-ON! fjr **

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Elena Sandu 19 September 2013

Great truth spoken here, a broken heart could be healed by taking care of those in need. Thank you!

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Noel Horlanda 13 May 2009

This piece of work is true, meaningful, believable, full of imagery, very creative indeed. Each line runs smoothly and flawless. Using simple words letting simple reader to understand what the author meant. I'll add to that: the author is talented. Well done!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 May 2009

Very nice and lovely poem.10 with love.

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*Trusting You* 05 April 2009

but when we love no more and heart's closed its door, We breath without a life so true... this is so good because it is so true and not everyone knows this.. its something to pass on to our kids... good job. Becca

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Sia Reis 26 January 2009

Great Poem. Melvin your poem is as beautiful as your thought.

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