Khairul Ahsan

Gold Star - 27,403 Points (13 December / Bangladesh)

Barter - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Give me a loving look for once,
I'll ask the full moon to spread
On your face her soft ambiance,
Just if you take this as a trade.

Come and enter into the fold
Of my long outstretched hands,
You'll feel the warmth I hold,
Your body so quietly demands.

No need to tell me you love me,
For me it's just enough if you be
With me, for I know when you agree,
You cannot just go without loving me.

Give me your little doll,
And be just a dolly yourself,
I'll be doing nothing else at all,
But playing with you and myself.

09 November 2013

Comments about Barter by Khairul Ahsan

  • (12/23/2013 12:28:00 AM)

    Nice concept. I get it. I've been reading a lot of poetry on this sit, and this one is professional grade! (Report) Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/15/2013 11:48:00 AM)

    @Pradip Chattopadhyay,
    Thanks a lot, Pradip!
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  • Katerina Richmond (11/10/2013 1:16:00 PM)

    This is awesome! What do you mean by playing with her and yourself though? :) I think I get it, but I'm not certain. Either way I like it! (Report) Reply

  • (11/9/2013 3:56:00 AM)

    a lovely poem indeed! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 9, 2013

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