Battle Between I Know And I Feel... Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Battle Between I Know And I Feel...

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Detach to realize
the reason, time to heal

Attach to redeem
but the feel is unchanged

Patch up to reassess
the broken heart

Watch it by realization
with glimpses of happiness

Parched soul to re modify
gives fake smiles

Arched eyes to point the relapses
to battle between i know and i feel...

Tuesday, May 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
tattle between i know and i feel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2016

The broken heart! ! Time to heal; and to move with a postiive mind. Overcoming all odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Stay blessed.

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Thanks fir the blessing dear

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Rajnish Manga 17 May 2016

Very thoughtfully articulated poem reflecting a tug of war between the forces of the head and the heart. Loved reading it's content in couplet form. Thanks, v.m.saraswathy ji. I quote: Patch up to reassess / the broken heart Arched eyes to point the relapses to battle between i know and i feel...

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Lovely encouragement, given by seasoned people like you, shaping me, thanks again

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