You Choose Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

You Choose

Rating: 5.0


My feathers are ready to cover you
In the waves of life
My love is to fix your broken heart
Full of sparkle and compassion
My gracious life is to forgive you
To make this world a better place
My wings are shields, to protect you from wildness
To support and surprise
My mercy is to heal your wounds
To learn through the mistakes
My prayers is to be blessed and
To redeem you from the rest
But you choose, for you and I
To respect each other for serenity and peace.

Saturday, April 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: choosing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
You choose for our peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Such an impressive invitation for which the choice should be a no brainier... Yet it is a choice... Well done!

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Happy to see a positive note, thanks dear welcome

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Too polite, inspired, thanks alot

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 April 2016

Your Poe.describes your broad and compassionate heart which is ready to give out everything you own and pray for his betterment. A classic poem enriched with pure love. It deserves 10.

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Welcome, our choices decides our happiness, thanks dear

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Paul Sebastian 19 April 2016

Love is a decision. It is choice. It is unconditional. Pure love expressed so well. My love is to fix your broken heart Full of sparkle and compassion My gracious life is to forgive you To make this world a better place Beutiful verses. Compact with love. Excellent. Score perfect 10.

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My gratitude to all the gracious comments, thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2016

Compassion! ! ! My love is to fix your broken heart. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Welcome to all your generosity, thanks again

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Welcome for the compassionate review, thanks

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