Where Is The Key? Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Where Is The Key?

Rating: 5.0


We are linked by the chain
And locked by the birth
In this materialistic world
By playing the monotonous games
With different people
Like practising the same skills
Everywhere, with everything
Everyone has same state of mind...
Endless roller coaster, nothing new
But where is the key to unlock it..?

Friday, May 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: materialism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Materialistic world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 13 May 2016

Yes..this world is materialistic.. nice one Mam..liked it very much..10 out of 10

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Sekharan Pookkat 13 May 2016

we can't lock our feelings and thoughts with a digital key from our birth to death every where and everybody is linked with an unknown bond of chain; though born free. thanks for sharing

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Thanks a lot for your precious comments, true.

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Sekharan Pookkat 13 May 2016

we can't lock our feelings and thoughts with a digital key from our birth to death every where and everybody is linked with an unknown bond of chain; though born free.

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Where is the key.Nice work.10

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Welcome, thanks for the review

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Yes! materialism had eaten us up in the world; but, that is NOT why we are here on earth. The KEY is the works of the truth; which leads to RIGHTEOUSNESS. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Wonderful key of righteousness, ofcourse we need unlock with it, thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2016

materialism eats the joy out of our minds........... it is always a joy to see the spiritual path. but do not follow any paths directed by the so called spiritual leaders. there is an inner cave in you and me. get inside, sit there. and you will experience the joy which i call spiritual joy and sometimes sensual which no one can take away. move away from materialism...... you are teaching the reader...... thank you dear poetess.

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Thanks for the review, I am sharing my experience, what life has taught, happy if my learning could help others to learn through, welcome for the inspirational, consistent comments from grounded souls like you, thanks dear

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