We are linked by the chain
And locked by the birth
In this materialistic world
By playing the monotonous games
With different people
Like practising the same skills
Everywhere, with everything
Everyone has same state of mind...
Endless roller coaster, nothing new
But where is the key to unlock it..?
we can't lock our feelings and thoughts with a digital key from our birth to death every where and everybody is linked with an unknown bond of chain; though born free. thanks for sharing
we can't lock our feelings and thoughts with a digital key from our birth to death every where and everybody is linked with an unknown bond of chain; though born free.
Yes! materialism had eaten us up in the world; but, that is NOT why we are here on earth. The KEY is the works of the truth; which leads to RIGHTEOUSNESS. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Wonderful key of righteousness, ofcourse we need unlock with it, thanks
materialism eats the joy out of our minds........... it is always a joy to see the spiritual path. but do not follow any paths directed by the so called spiritual leaders. there is an inner cave in you and me. get inside, sit there. and you will experience the joy which i call spiritual joy and sometimes sensual which no one can take away. move away from materialism...... you are teaching the reader...... thank you dear poetess.
Thanks for the review, I am sharing my experience, what life has taught, happy if my learning could help others to learn through, welcome for the inspirational, consistent comments from grounded souls like you, thanks dear
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes..this world is materialistic.. nice one Mam..liked it very much..10 out of 10